FSt-Germain's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Pentanium]

This is really well done. Honestly I'm kind of jealous. I think all the game is missing is some way to deselect a pentagon if already selected. You could select one that's diagonal, but it makes a bad sound which discourages it. Otherwise, great game.

JauqGames responds:

Thanks for the review, and BTW you can click a selected pentagon to deselect it, which also makes the bad sound, but at least you deselected it :3

[Run Ralph Run!]

Simply Brilliant! I got a minute and six seconds.

I think that the story goes a little something like this...
One cold morning, Ralph went out for a jog, when a giant man eating rabbit jumped out of the street! Ralph sprung into action and killed the beast with one blow to stomach! But then, the clown from the circus next door got mad! They were training the bunny to do a trick, and so, they all took off their makeup and put on some rad blue clothes, and hunted poor Ralph down. Everyone was super scared and ran home, which left just Ralph and the clowns. Then a minute later, the clowns called some more clown friends, and hunted Ralph to the death!

DWallacee responds:

cool story bro

[The Waters Be Icey Matey]

Really cool stuff! I found the game to be fun and captivating.I thought that the slow down mechanic was really cool. I think some sounds would be a really nice touch. It would add to the immersion. Finally make sure that people know that the dock is their goal. When I saw it, I thought it was an obstacle and passed it, until I thought that it might be an objective. You could do this by having a yellow circle under it or something, just guide the player to the dock. And for my time, I got about 180, not sure if that's good or not though.

Thanks for sharing the game, it was pretty fun, and I enjoyed it.

therealgamingturtle responds:

thanks and i am going to fix it as soon as posibole and i got like 230 so 180 is better then me XD

(Later) now i added a light to the port and i just got a new time record 125 so try to beat it if you think u can XD

[Spacestation .1]

Couldn't play because of unity web player, so obviously the no stars doesn't represent games quality, but do you think that you could upload a webgl version? or would that interfere with the multiplayer?

RobEnSam responds:

got some errors when i try to export WebGL . have to look into that , but will do eventually :)

[Geometrical Trigonometrical Circles]

Cool concept. I really like the little story you have. The fact that I know that I'm a virus gives me a sense of objective, rather than just floating around. I don't know why you gave it the name it has. It's kind of funny but I hope you change it from Geometrical Trigonometrical Circles to something better.

I'm not sure if there is a way to restart once you die, but I couldn't find one. That would be really nice, I don't like reloading the page just to play again, although it's kind of clever because it dramatically increases the views ;)

The colour palet is very nice. It looks really good. But can I suggest a red one, it would make more sense in terms of the story. More of your insides are red rather than blue.

One more thing, I didn't notice any sound. just a simple soundtrack would be nice, but sound effects are really great and add another layer of immersion.

Overall, good work, this is a good concept for a game and with a bit more work it could become something really cool and original. Stick with your story, it's more interesting than just stay inside the circle. Good luck! I'm excited to see what else you'll develop.

CatScratcher999999 responds:

I'll try to make a better respawn method, and I'll find some music to put into it. Thanks for letting me know! I'll keep trying, but Newgrounds isn't being very nice about it. The updated .zip file won't upload, and whenever I preview it, the game is missing.

[ARES]

Interesting concept, just not for me though :( Good work on the visuals, despite being simplistic, I like the glow that the lines give off.

SittGames responds:

Thank you very much! Glad you enjoyed the visuals. This is just a prototype and I do plan on making this game extra polished with different game modes! Any extra feedback you might have is appreciated.

[Timer Tim]

Cool game, but i didn't give it three stars because the keys aren't locked. The game scrolls when you play. This could be fixed however by programming to use wasd or some other combination of controls. Also there wasn't any music and no way to restart. Finally the game crashed on me twice, but that's not your fault so I won't hold it against you.

On the Positive side however, making your first game is really hard so good work. And the fact that you managed to keep it simple is impressive. Good work on your first game, and good luck being a game developer. I'm sure with a bit of practice, you could be a pro.

SpaceSpector responds:

Thanks man ill try to improve :D
(edit): iv'e changed the controls to w,a,s,d and added a restart feature with the "R" key now im trying to find some music and sound effects to finish it off